Tuesday, October 14, 2008

I WISH

I wish that we would just have to come to school for half a day and be out. Then I wish we would have a longer summer so we can do more stuff, but most of all I would want to have funner classes so we wouldn't have a lot of homework to take home and we can just mess around and not be able to fail any classes.

1 comment:

mrs. jenkins said...

Hmm, sounds like someone is already tired of school this year? I agree that school can be a bore sometimes, but just know you would be much worse off if you weren't given the opportunity to go to school for free! I think you would find it interesting how many people your age would literally give ANYTHING at a chance to go to school, even if they had to pay for it.

I took major points off of your grade for this journal because you only wrote two sentences. The first sentence was okay but the second is one long run-on. This is not effective in your writing so you MUST change this before you write again next time.